Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is thought by many that the discrimination based on gender-type in the nation's army forces or police department should be demolished, and there should be equal opportunities for women in these occupations.
The women's fight for equity in every realm has been an ongoing agenda for a decade, and when it comes to serving a nation as a soldier or police officer, options are comparatively limited for them. People who claim that women must contribute equally to military services and police, consider that a prejudiced system for designating roles based on their gender has to be ended, and suitable candidates should be selected based on their capabilities and personal skills. Moreover, many females have demonstrated their expertise in various onsite jobs as a warrior or police officer. Not only this but also, many have gone to the space for exploration and find a new life. For instance, Kalpana Chawala ' an Indian scientist' was the first woman who landed at the moon.
On the flip-side, despite the above-mentioned arguments, many individuals still think that these kinds of jobs are not made for women because they are physically incapable and weak for facing such extreme situations. Furthermore, being emotional is a downside of a female character, and they can effortlessly be distracted by their family especially children. To cite an example, numerous females give-up their occupation post their pregnancy. As a consequence, reliability at the job goes for a tose most of the time in-case female employees.
To conclude, in my opinion, being equally treated across all job functions and given unbiased opportunities for all occupations including .. army as veteran or police-officer is a basic right of women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30324909747 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03592007867 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624548736462 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0706724415 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.416666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228637322382 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784020917128 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559260804735 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141346599424 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268911883437 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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