Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

The weather preferences are different for each individual. While the warn ambience seems more likable to a few people, others tend to enjoy the livelihood of cold nations. In my opinion, it is a matter of personal choice as both climates have their perks and downsides for the human-beings.

To start with, undoubtedly, the hot climate is ideal for outdoor activities and spending holidays at the beach as there is no need to carry a huge bundle of clothes along with you. Not only this but also a cold climate seems to have a negative impact on people's minds as it is often observed that people feel highly depressed during winters due to gloomy days. Unlike cold days, in summer days are lengthier so, there is more time for extra curriculum activities post working hours such as reading books, watching movies and have spare time to spend with the family. For instance, malls are more crowded in summers than on cold days.

On the flip-side, cold places are very quiet and are less congested because very few people prefer to stay permanently in freezing circumstances, such as, senior citizens as it is not good for their heart. Further, it has clinically proven that the people who are from colder places, have a great digestive system and healthy beautiful skin. Kashmiri people in India and Canadians are the perfect example of this statement. Moreover, as a result of less population, the level of pollution and air-quality is also favourable.

In conclusion, despite the certain benefits and drawbacks of living in a cold and hot climate, in my opinion, both the weathers have an equal significance for the human-beings. However, predispositions are diverse among individuals.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01060070671 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76538736959 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3026415634 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179770113841 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562281935643 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426361594582 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109619187621 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297352614595 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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