Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
Many individuals choose to reside in countries with warmer weather, others prefer to live in cold countries. In my opinion, although the citizens who live in cold weather are inclined to be more successful and wealthier, it is more preferable for me to live in a hot climate since warm weather sparks positivity and joy of life in people’s mind.
First and foremost, many people choose to live in cold places since they believe that this climate steers them to focus on their work which can increase their prosperity due to the lack of distractions from the shiny weather. This is because these individuals can mostly adopt a hardworking life with focusing on their career tasks attentively since it is not available for them to enjoy the nice weather. For instance, people who live in Germany, Netherlands and the UK where all have cold climates, are the wealthiest citizens of the European Union; however, people in Portugal, Greece and Spain where have warmer climates, cope with financial problems excessively. However, I think that people can also be successful in hot areas if they carefully focus on their career.
On the other hand, I believe that living in hot climate is much more favourable since warm weather fulfills the enjoyment from life which is mostly the primary aim of every person. Considering this, people can feel more energetic, positive and cheerful when they the weather is crystal clear which allows them do integrate with the environment to a greater extend since they can spend more time outdoors. To illustrate, happiest countries in the world along with lowest suicide rates are mostly the countries where the weather is mostly sunny which enables the citizens to spend outdoors. As a result, hot climate offers people to live in an attractive environment, which allows people to live joyfully.
To sum up, although many people prefer to live in cold climates which allow them to focus on their career goals that would possibly make them wealthier, I believe that living in hot climate charms my soul abundantly which is the fundamental need for everyone. Nevertheless, people can become successful anywhere if they persistently focus on their goals carefully.
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Suggestion: , the happiest
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Suggestion: with the lowest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12672176309 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66044113134 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476584022039 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6711646003 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.083333333 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215135532726 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990496468205 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602977390739 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155191456767 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481073799022 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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