Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
thank them for the holiday and the photos
explain why you didn’t write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Alice,
Hope you and Jason are both fine. I am writing to express how grateful I am with the holiday that I had with you in Paris last month since it was a super exciting vacation for me. Apart from that, I wish to inform you that I received the holiday photos that you sent.
I sincerely thank you for your hospitality and photos which I already put it in my living room. I will always remember our unforgetttable memories whenever I see those pictures.
I couldn’t write earlier since I was looking after my mother due to the fact that she was sick for the last 2 weeks. Hopefully she is fine now but she still stays at my home until she feels better.
Next month, there is going to be a parade of Canadian Culture in Toronto which will be amazing. Therefore, I want to invite you to the event and you can also stay at my home. We can travel to the Niagara Falls and visit the Toronto Zoo which is one of the biggest zoos in the world.
I am looking forward to hearing your reply about my offer. I will be grateful if you can make it.
Best Wishes,
Ali Larter
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ories whenever I see those pictures. I couldn't write earlier since I was...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28502415459 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28030581889 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2547184751 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2307692308 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284060673526 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940049515949 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898095491833 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147057587861 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996293593619 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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