Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
- thank them for the holiday and photos
- explain why you did not write letter earlier.
- invite them to come and stay with you.
Hi Smith and Paul,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and prosperity. Although, it's just a short time that we last met one another, it feels much longer.
I am really very thankful to both of you to spend such a great time in your homeland. I have received your letter and photographs that would took together. These are very amazing. I have shown it to my family members; they like the locations and places, we visited and have you seen that monkey standing behind us in the zoo, is looking very funny.
Sorry, as it has taken me long to write you back and thank you. AC, the very next day when I returned home my niece fell down from the stairs and injured seriously. I was engaged in looking after her but now she is better than before.
You will be very glad to know that next month there is a function at my home due to the silver jubilee of my parents as well as we have shifted into the new house. I know you will definitely join us and must stay with us. we are planning to arrange party on 26 November. I really hope to meet you on this occasion.
Take care and write me back.
Anna George
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1628959276 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08694925176 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1649724169 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3333333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268131037404 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809712905399 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070330717258 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134159829997 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598610402979 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.