Some people believe that parents should not give expensive gifts to their children. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Gone are the days when children's demands were paid least heed, however, in this competitive era, this attitude of parents has undergone a sea change and they have started over pampering their children by offering expensive gifts.A section of society highly favours this practice while others are more suspicious about its repercussions. To my mind, offering costly gifts is never a wise idea instead of it they should be encouraged by giving limited and useful materials, the same will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
First and foremost reason that why parents should not give their children luxurious gifts is that children become materialistic and money minded. By this I mean, children always seek for luxurious gifts in further life also and sometimes they get haywire from the real path of life. Also, sometime children start demanding more costly things with the passage of time; which may deteriorate their motive and sometimes parents are unable to cater their all the demands. In such cases, children start disrespecting their parents and their elders. As such, pampering the children is not worth.
However, some people believe that by giving gifts to the children time to time makes them more energetic and inspires them to get more success in their life. In other words, when offsprings get the gifts, it creates curiosity among them to get more the material goods by studying or by hardworking more. Nevertheless, juveniles get deprived from the love from their surroundings. To be more precise, they start indulging in material goods for most of the times and forget the value of kith and kin. Hence, presenting costly gifts to the children should be avoided by the parents. A survey conducted in USA, for example, revealed that young ones overwhelmed by guardians with presents have no affection with near and dear ones.
To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that although parents can encourage and inspire their children by offering alluring things however it may be hazardous for them in long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, i mean, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12386706949 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60217146926 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564954682779 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5655131377 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281887310748 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103325846284 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753800394197 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161941123332 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634738323344 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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