Should young people follow older people’s advice or is it good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
Gone are the days when ideas of older people were given due reverence, however, this attitude of people has undergone a sea change ever since the modernization took place. A segment of society considers it a positive turn while others are more suspicious about its repercussions. This essay shall elucidate both the perspectives in the ensuing segments along with my personal slant.
First and foremost reason why one should consider the advice of elders is that they are veteran and can guide their generation in a perfect manner. To be more precise, due to their long experience of each and every walk of human life one can learn a lot to make their future bright as individuals can learn from their past mistakes; by improving them they can ameliorate their present and future, which is key to success. Not only this but experienced people have vast knowledge about personal and professional life as well. To elucidate, one can take advises from seniors in order to strike the right balance between family and work which is the major issue these days. Indulgence of elders, for example, revealed by a survey, is quite beneficial to bring perfection in family and work life.
However, masses who want to demand to challenge traditional thoughts have their own views; as they believe such people have obsolete ideas which have nothing to do with this epoch of science and technology. On other words, they are are considered having outdated methods to deal with the different aspects of life. Therefore, new generation avoids following them. Adults nowadays, to exemplify, prefer to get married to an educated partner irrespective of their caste, which is however strictly against to the norms of ancestors. What is more, sticking to one tradition forces the youngsters to take back seat, specially in this western era. As, in this epoch they get deprived of exploring the world in terms of culture and tradition.
To recapitulate, after analysing both the the above stated viewpoints I vehemently vouch that undoubtedly grey people should be given due respect by following their footprints yet when it comes to technology or modernization, it is better to have latest methods to keep pace with the present scenario.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03260869565 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6925330394 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611413043478 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2890639548 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.466666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113837255213 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364818520186 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411083299189 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762142358413 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281701210789 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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