All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause?
How can we overcome the problems of poverty?
In today’s world, the distinctions between wealthy and poor have been getting more and more wider which cause several problems for the society that the order in the country will be possibly distrupted. In my opinion, in order to keep the peace in the society, the poverty should be vanished which can be achieved with offering more jobs to poor residents and distributing the national wealth to all parties in a more equal manner.
To begin with, the deteriorated tranquility in countries is the most possible cause of the huge income gaps between the rich and the poor. This is because people feel more polarised when the level of financial earnings between citizens is gigantic that is a reason for the social distruptions among the country. To illustrate, the yellow vested groups in France, made countrywide protests in the streets which distrupted the daily life to share their anger towards the income differences between the French society in 2019, and the Government of France spent so much resources to overcome the demonstrations with procuring items to prevent the issue such as water cannons, tear gases, police cars and recruiting the police officers. Consequently, societal income classes should be as close as to each other not to face unwanted issues or polarisation in the nation.
In order to cope with the poverty, there are several solutions that can be applied which are prioritizing to employ more low-income individuals and applying govermental policies and laws which would decrease the disadvantageous position of poor people. Considering this, building more factories in the rural and the underdeveloped districts in the country would ensure people to get employed which would enable them to sustain a better life. Apart from that, government should offer extra advantages and financial assistance to poor people to fight with poverty. For instance, Turkish government does not charge poor people for healthcare and education and it recruits priorly people from the east part of the country, which is the poorest region, for governmental positions to cure the poverty issue. As a result, government should take primary responsibility to overcome the poverty problem with giving financial aid and offering more jobs to low income citizens who are the most effected people of the poverty.
To sum up, the rich and the poor have been getting more distant to each other which may cause social issues, however, governmental policies could heal the poverty problem in the nation with focusing to increase the economic level of poor people, and the State can reduce the financial problems of poor individuals with monetary aids.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'wider' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: wider
...thy and poor have been getting more and more wider which cause several problems for the so...
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Line 5, column 563, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
..., and the Government of France spent so much resources to overcome the demonstration...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, apart from, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2546728972 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75065400873 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518691588785 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7917400604 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.416666667 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6666666667 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159619908799 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624534849598 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520481201672 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114415192744 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519147464449 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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