These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping?
Nowadays people prefer to do their shopping online rather than using the traditional methods. Shopping malls and grocery stores are not crowded as they were few years ago. I will discuss the advantages of online shopping which offers convenience for users and its superiority in particular situations over traditional alternatives. Also, I will explain the drawbacks of online merchandising which cause people to be less active and the possible hardships when buying the clothing apperals.
The benefits of online shopping are plentiful since online purchasing allows shoppers to buy their needs easily and enables the people to compare the price differences among different brands conveniently. This is because individuals do not need to go to the stores physically, so they can click and purchase items without leaving their comfortable houses. For instance, Walmart allows its customers to shop even grocery and produce products online which would enable the people to save plenty of time. Apart from that, online retail websites ensure people to check the distinctions between stores, therefore it is much rapid for people to choose the product which is the most consistent for the purchaser. As an example, an online application called “Flipp” offers the cheapest prized grocery items in the nearby convenience stores to its customers. Consequently, online shopping made people’s lives smoother because every type of products can be delivered to customer’s door and everyone has a greater chance to evalaute the prices in the marketplace.
There are several disadvantages of online shopping that it causes people to act less actively and purchasing shopping apparel products online can be problematic for the customers. Considering this, people tend to shop online rather than going to shopping malls, hence it causes people to have lower activity levels. To illustrate, technology giant, Amazon, enables people to buy most of the products online which makes people more lazy and obese, thus choosing these online stores could be unhealthy for the customers. Another issue concerns is, purchasing pants, shoes or shirts online could be difficult, since people need to try it before they buy it, so online purchased items may not fit to the buyer and it would cause delays. For example, if a size 9 trekking shoe which is bought online is small for the buyer, then he/she needs to replace it at least with a size 9.5 that would take at least one week to receive the new one. As a result, online shopping decreases the level of activity of the users along with creating issues when it is chosen to buy clothing products.
To sum up, it is obvious that online shopping is widely used in people’s daily life due to its convenience, however, its drawbacks should not be neglected to have a more satisfactory shopping experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, at least, for example, for instance, in particular, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2419.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 459.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27015250545 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81549598185 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525054466231 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.0040655373 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.294117647 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373863255322 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14882921707 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838229744922 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252817342739 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513585555944 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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