It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools.
What do you think?
Most of the people believe that doing exercise is beneficial for the young adults. To this end, they argue that sports classes and physical education should be mandatory at schools. In my opinion, it is a viable idea since physical education ensures the youngsters to flourish vigorously and sport is helpful for the kids to improve their social skills.
First and foremost, classes at school which encourage the students to do physical activities, allow the young adults to be raised in a healthy manner. This is because physical classes enable them to stay fit, active and healthy. To illustrate, when young boys prefer to play basketball at school, they tend to be taller, more muscular and healthier which are all positive developments for their flourishment. When the kids do aerobics or participate in running events in the class, they can sustain their well-being and growth with being active along with avoiding to become overweight. Consequently, exercises at schools enable the students to have better health conditions.
Another issue of concern is doing sport activities at school induces the pupils to interact with each other which expands their social skills. Considering this, participating in sports events provide a social environment, thus the kids can be equipped with the fundamental social abilities such as being a team-player, emphathic, kind and they learn how to start and maintain a dialogue. For instance, team sports help young people to comprehend the division of labor, importance of being united which are essential social capabilities. As a result, sport is useful for youngsters to develop their social features which would also be further advantageous in their adult life.
To sum up, I firmly agree that sport activities and exercises should be included in the school curriculum, since these classes are not only beneficial for the proper flourishment of young people, but also encouraging the students to have advanced social skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoiding becoming'.
Suggestion: avoiding becoming
...and growth with being active along with avoiding to become overweight. Consequently, exercises at ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33439490446 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7941753922 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3861110909 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.846153846 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24407681859 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995747466908 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456775533832 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171300857713 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560427435042 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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