Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Many people argue that homeschooling is the best option for the pupils’ flourishment. Others believe that students should be taught at schools. In my opinion, although teaching at home might come with advantages especially for the disabled kids, it is always a better choice to send the young adults to schools where they can develop their social skills and improve their self-confidence.
First and foremost, it is logical to educate the youngsters at home who need special assistance. This is because many disabled children, who cannot walk, speak, see or hear, may face difficulties if they are sent to schools, thus they can be educated in a more comprehensive way when they are at house. To illustrate, a child who sits in a wheelchair might face problems at a regular classroom, since he/she may not run, walk as his / her peers which might demoralize him/her that would affect his/her success at school negatively. However, I believe that if a school which only accepts disabled students is available in the neighbourhood, parents should prefer to send their kids to that institution because integrating in a school environment is much more helpful for the kids to be flourished vigorously, socially and mentally which affect academic results and comprehension of the school subjects. Consequently, even though homeschooling comes with advantages, offspring should be educated at schools if it is possible.
On the other hand, going to school ensures the students to be raised socially where they can boost their self-confidence along with being with their schoolmates. Considering this, students at school can exchange and discuss different ideas with their peers, widen their friend network, who can be a companion to spend their free time joyfully, learn how to behave in a group, such as the classroom. Apart from that, with going to school, children can grow up as self-confident individuals since they solve get used to solve issues at school without the help of their parents. For instance, when a kid goes to school by himself/herself, and if he/she handles the dispute with his/her friends or teachers alone, he/she will feel more confident about himself/herself. As a result, every student should be encouraged to study at school rather at home due to the social benefits for the pupils.
To sum up, I accept that many situations may force the parents to choose homeschooling due to the health problems of their kids, however, if it is feasible, every kid should be taught at school in order to get used to the social environment that would develop their social skills.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, so, thus, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15294117647 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95364963306 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524705882353 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.507637053 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.428571429 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3571428571 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203968193588 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843233783015 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438897997276 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139887457912 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757284574063 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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