Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

Education system has evolved over the years and its crucial that children gets basic teaching from the very start. Here we will discuss most viable option in this regards.

There is no doubt that study does begin at home and parents are responsible for making their kids aware of building blocks such as moral values, language and social code of conduct. For example, a society in rural Africa doesn't have the luxury of enough schools and continuing the formal practice of teaching pupil at home is the only significant way to improve their personality and prepare them for further higher curriculum.

although, with increase number of nursery’s and professional certified teachers available, one should look to invest in child's future by admitting them to one of these such places. Many of the advantages includes that children will gain confidence, while performing tasks with their peers and they will understand the healthy competition to grow beyond.

Furthermore, as conducted in a study by Hindustan times in India, children who perform different sports activities at school have better health and fitness. In addition, some facility focuses on cognitive skills that may significantly help improve brain storming, like puzzle quiz.

In conclusion, child's edification is of utmost importance; whether it's provided at home or school; although in my opinion, sending pupil at schooling institution may result in higher growth.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44247787611 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74784104946 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70796460177 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1499852166 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257900600265 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832270950751 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513857481443 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114741673495 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413609938769 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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