Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
It has been widely debated whether children should be taught at home or sent to school to be properly advanced. This essay will discuss the benefits of each venue and I will share my own opinion that is I believe studying at schools is a better way.
There are several merits of choosing the traditional way and utilizing educational institutions for a child’s education. First of all, teamwork and collaboration are essential components of success and development for every person. Therefore, attending schools along with other children can enhance social and emotional intelligence that can be great skillsets to succeed in life in the future. Besides, schools can efficiently teach most subjects due to the availability of appropriate facilities. For instance, geography classes may need specific models of the planets, while biology lessons require skeletons and specific plants to model various objects of nature.
However, homeschooling also has several advantages too. Most importantly, it can provide a safe environment that can help children avoid bullying and other types of distractions. For instance, many people can experience bullying in childhood due to misbehaving classmates that can have detrimental effects on the child’s development. Also, when a student is taught at home, parents can actively participate in the process and ensure that their son or daughter is learning properly. At schools, many pupils may have difficulties during lessons and their parents can be out of the loop and unknowingly ignore various learning issues such as procrastination or a lack of attention.
In conclusion, attending educational institutions have several benefits such as real-world simulation to develop teamwork skills and accessibility of teaching tools, while homeschooling can provide a safe atmosphere and better control for parents. I believe that the first option is better since its benefits carry more important merits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60942760943 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12130837171 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0565867567 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254459204147 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787224613845 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335922526972 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146671328782 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365730161949 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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