Work is being done on the street where you live The noise is disturbing you Write a letter of complaint to your local council In your letter introduce yourself explain what the problem is suggest solutions to the problem

Essay topics:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:

introduce yourself

explain what the problem is

suggest solutions to the problem

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Adam and I am one of the residents of the Birlik street, where your company is doing construction processes such as cutting trees, constructing new buildings in the neighbourhood.

My purpose of writing this letter is to tell about the difficulties that are disturbing the residents. Noise levels are too high to live comfortably and it is causing many inconveniences to our lives. For instance, since some of the work start early at around 6 AM, it is waking me up too early. It is disturbing my sleeping schedule and I am afraid it might cause health issues in the long-term.

Therefore, I would like you to consider my complaints and solve these problems. It would be better if you could ask workers to start working at 10 AM in the morning, so that most of the residents will be gone to work already. Ålso, it would be great to make sure that by 6 PM the work is done, so that we can be peacefully at home after work.

Hopefully, these disturbances will be halted soon and my requests will not cause major difficulties in the work progress.

Yours faithfully,

Adam Levin

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 222, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ences to our lives. For instance, since some of the work start early at around 6 AM, it is ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 148, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'AM'.
Suggestion: AM
...ould ask workers to start working at 10 AM in the morning, so that most of the residents will be ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.675 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81245444408 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9008908598 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210491772926 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759361591891 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312363600662 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998303167688 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363947952333 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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