More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Unfortunately, we are witnessing a crisis in wildlife, as the number of wild animals is dropping dramatically all over the world. This essay will discuss the possible causes of this issue and solutions to halt these changes.
The primary reason for the population drop in wild animals is due to a shift in the ecosystem caused by industrial and human activities. For instance, many major factories are excessively releasing pollutant gases into the clouds and causing a shift in the ecosystem. Therefore, these anomalies negatively affect the population of the oceans. Also, human leisure activities such as hunting and fishing are causing many animals to go extinct. Since all the animals are dependent on each other for survival and linked through the ecosystem chain, when there is a drop in one of the participants, it leads more animals in the upper chain to die.
There are several solutions to overcome this alarming issue. One practical way is to identify big corporations that are polluting the environment and pressure them to be conscious of the environment. For instance, world organizations should encourage these big companies to optimize their systems to lower adversarial effects. Besides, governments can also encourage people to care for the environment by educating them from a young age. In this way, people may consider switching to electric vehicles for transportation and renewable energy sources at their homes. Besides, it can potentially discourage people to avoid hunting and fishing.
In conclusion, the main reason for the drop in population of the animal world is anomalies in the ecosystem that humans are causing. Feasible solutions to reverse this trend is to pressure major pollutants and educate people to care more for nature.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30496453901 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93039999017 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8687626107 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232400604632 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723042309238 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439309256928 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141969538009 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263847992764 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.