More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Earth is a planet for all, but owing to human activities such as deforestation and animal poaching, wildlife is struggling to survive. It has driven away some of the species on the edge of extinction, while others are on the endangered list. This problem can be solved by making strict regulations by the government in order to protect the life of wild animals.
The major reason for the endangering of wild animal’s life is the deforestation. The population of the countries is burgeoning at such a fast pace that more land is required for creating dwellings for them. It has lead to the clearance of the forest areas and the loss of habitat of the fauna. Deprived of their natural environment, animals move to nearby cities or villages where they are often killed by the locals out of fear. Moreover, excessive poaching has also elevated the extinction of wild species. For instance, skin, fur and tusks of certain animals are used for creating fashion accessories like coats and bags, and also for illegal trading. It has resulted in an increasing hunting of wild animals.
The best way to solve the problem of disappearance of wildlife would be to enact stringent regulations regarding minimum forest area and hunting. The government should clearly define the boundaries where no human intervention be allowed and reserve a specified area for the habitat of near-to-extinction wild animals. There should be a complete ban on killing animals, by the hunters, for the sake of human desires. Moreover, it is high time to aware the public about the significance of the flora and fauna in our environment. Take, for example, a TV program that can motivate people to preserve wildlife and not to use products made up of them. Thus, disappearance of wild creatures can be controlled.
In conclusion, the government should tackle the escalating problem of extinction and endangering of certain wild animals by forming strict rules and regulations about the wild habitat and excessive poaching. If these measures are followed, we can surely make an earth a beautiful planet where all species co-exist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE
Message: Simply use 'some'.
...ruggling to survive. It has driven away some of the species on the edge of extinction, whil...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09195402299 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95300952023 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0707115432 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305168855909 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854955225025 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614433695046 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178330505635 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438083606425 0.056905535591 77% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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