Work is being done on the streets where you live. The noise is disturbing you.
Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain what the problem is
Suggest solutions to the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
This letter is a formal complaint with regards to explicit my discontent towards the road maintenance carried in the suburbs of Red Avenue.
My name is Billy Jones and I am a final year student of Human Sciences at Humber College. I have been living in the area of Sr Jones Street, 428 Road, Toronto, Canada for the past 21 years. To recollect correctly I had never any chances of reaching to council before.
As a starting point, it has been constantly observed that the workers tend to work during late hours of the day to avoid traffic congestion. Moreover, the noise generated from the hefty machines and gigantic gears do not let the elderly and children sleep. Not only the neighborhood is irked up with the ongoing operations of the pathway build however, it has also disturbed my schedule deliberately. Besides this, I have to take my final exams in the coming week and I am unable to concentrate on my studies due to lack of sleep and anxiety.
Since you are the council of the area hence has the authority to make the situation better. I would like to make few suggestions so that the society does not face any repercussions. Firstly, the work can be split in two slots of the day which will expedite process. The nosiest part can be done during the day so that noise blends with the other sounds and the rest of the work can be done in the second half of the slot with minimalist noise. Secondly, the council can also empower the workforce numbers for the speedy closure.
I would appreciate your immediate attention towards this matter and looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Billy Jones
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 292.0 206.0 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68493150685 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5227153427 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7971013351 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175822533847 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491205982608 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372724108094 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783788884049 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398744559888 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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