Some people think it is wise to give their children mobile phones, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As per the common adage ‘parents can make or mar the personality of the children‘. Nonetheless, there are demographics who contemplate the fact that the offsprings should have the mobile phone; however, there are others who discord. Well, It is inevitable that mobile phone brings pros and cons along with it if used wisely.
Whilst, the accelerating technology has brought conducive outcomes with the advent of time. Firstly, parents can have a direct contact with the juvenile whenever there is a need and that helps the parent to be in sigh of relief when they are away. Secondly, mobile phone has become a necessary tool for the learning these days as they are innumerable options for the child required of cognitive skills. For instance, two decades ago finding a legit information was a thriving job; nonetheless, nowadays wikipedia act as a common platform to find information. At last, the phone has various applications to stay connected with your friends and family online with a minimal tariff rates. Thus in other words, mobile data in abundance give plethora of options to study and stay connected with the world at any given time of the hour.
Despite the mobile phone brings incessant benedictions; however, there are numerous drawbacks that it can debilitate the tender mind if not used wisely. One way if the parent go unbridle about the usage of the cellular phone by the young ones. For instance, If there is no constant check by the parents and there might be a chance that the gullible mind can become prey of filthy sites or pedophilia. Not only the online sites can have deplorable effect; however, the online group that the child is part of can also get influenced by the wrongdoing such as drugs, gambling and boozing. Also, at the young age they can be looted by the hackers by getting duped for the emulated products sold online.
All in all, there are countless virtues that the mobile phone brings such as online learning, social bondage; however, I believe if care takers go unbridle with the teenagers it can have negative ramifications on the personality and the development of the child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 687, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96111111111 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69317839672 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6178352919 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.066666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0654501636269 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233218357906 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308361504381 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420230467898 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266505591948 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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