During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr Brown,
The purpose of this letter is to apply for a job position in one of your restaurants and was asked by you to approach for the same.
Just to recall, my name is Mansi Singh and we met during our recent plane journey from 'Mumbai to Chandigarh' on September, 30th 2019. Ironically, the person sat next to you felt uncomfortable and then one of the crew members had swapped my seat next to you. Though, it was a short trip, however we had conversation around the chain of restaurants owned by you.
As far as my professional occurrence is concerned, I am looking for a challenging role that will add an extra advantage to my résumé. So, the profile am interested in to work as a 'Service Quality Assurance Manager'. This role will be a boon to you as well as to your company for supervising the quality of food served in the Hotels.
The reason why I am the right fit for the role is, I hold a 'Master Degree in Catering and Business Services' and I also have relevant experience of Service Quality Assurance for the yesteryear's. In the past, I had worked with the renowned restaurants and accolade appreciations as Best and Star performer for the year 2018. Not only the performance matters, I can also work in late night shifts as per flexible schedule. In addition, I am well-verse with French and Spanish language which shows the capability to work with diverse clients.
I hope you would consider my application and looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mansi Singh
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, well, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72862453532 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75939619373 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3456587149 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8461538462 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184393068078 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645583284178 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702779425022 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118566099676 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080761890581 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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