In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
Houses are pervasive and there are no doubts that they exist everywhere. Nowadays, there is a considerable demand for building some household shelters in the wilderness, however, for few folks it is imperative to ensure the longevity of the livelihood.
To embark on, there are possible reasons for this shift to watch the rural areas. Firstly, the city dwellers chronically lack open spaces which affect their health due to huge skyscrapers, jam-packed traffic and noise pollution which deteriorates one’s life style. Secondly, the children are bound to play computer games which also adversely affect their development and growth. Having said that these children do not have open parks and gardens to actively involve them into physical activity which in turn results in dilapidated mindset. Lastly, in the hustle-bustle of work and to meet the living most of these folks lack nutritional diet and exercise. In other words, to meet the hand and feet support of the family these folks end up spending extra time in offices with 0% thoughts on their well-being.
On the other hand people protagonists wants to save the world from the effects of global warming. For them the countryside is on the verge of extinction. In the few decades, there has been a constant increase in the deforestation which had ramifications on the ecological biodiversity and in extinction of various species. Not only this, with building homes there have been more endanger to the human beings because of the carbon footprints left around. In the yesteryear’s, meteorologists are unable to understand the weather conditions and it has become difficult to predict the weather forecasts. In addition, these innumerable factors such as floods, rains, and hurricanes are the possible reasons to safeguard the motherland from the natural and man-made disasters.
In a nutshell, to recapitulate the above points there are challenges with the city dwellers, however I believe it is our duty to avoid the possible consequences that will crop up when moving to a countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, no doubt, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05403585215 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0860329939 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.538461538 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130920900454 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458023113609 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579942399832 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737994602925 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366811071118 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.