Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It has been argued that homeschooling is the best way to help in child’s development, while others insist that it is mandatory for children to attend school in order to socialize with other students. Before coming up with a wise judgement, I will examine affirmative perspectives of both homeschooling and public school.
There are major reasons why people choose homeschooling rather than public education. First of all, children who live in remote areas could not punctually atten public school. Another reason is that a child has his own pace to acquire knowledge. In other words, publive schools can hardly adjust their curriculum based on individual’s ability. For instance, in Korea, students are divided by their ages instead of their intellectual ability, leading students to have uneven opportuniites to study what they want to.
Although there are many advantages of homeschooling, others think that attending public school has far more merits. Firstly, public schools where students learn how to make relationship are the niche to deal with the problem regarding socializing. Unlikely, homeschooled students are in solitude because their friends are their parents only. Plenty of educational materials are another merit of attedning schools such as sports, musical instruments and paintings. For example, in Canada, Federal Education Association offers variety of subject, which stimulate student’s brain effectively.
I personally think that it is very important to learn public educations becuase It can remarkably aid youths to acquire interpersonal skills and stimulate brain development which are essential elements to adolescence even though homeschooling has its advanatage.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78346456693 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13854603295 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673228346457 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5660087115 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202371994185 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674270664155 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560443386899 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11957013934 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056191753953 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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