Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
food is always going to be essential for us, humans and with the rapid rate of growth of restaurant, in online and as well as outlets. access to prepared food is lot easier compared to before, therefore increased numbers of food waste. We will further discus the root cause of this action and possible solutions.
Perhaps the major issue is lack of conscious awareness, meaning that critical information’s such as global hunger index and famine affected areas on global scale is not well-known. Another reason could be, because wages are significantly higher, this corresponds to enough money in the pocket to, not to worry about money and keep choosing from different food choices. Hence collectively larger food waste. Finally, in today’s era, food industry is substantially big commercial market, that is why readily accessible meal with variety of choices from different cuisines are easily available and, not only that they could easily be delivered at your doorstep for free. this has created a use and throw mindset within people.
Firstly, food production units and restaurants should include informative label similar to something which is labeled on smoking brands. For example, “The food you waste, could save a life”. this will create social food awareness among the buyers. In addition to this, each individual around the globe must step-up and take the responsibility to create or learn self-awareness and possibly pass the information to peers. further more, government should also regulate and participate in creating social awareness campaign by employing some famous personality or celebrity whom people look up to.
In conclusion, I believe that, since people have more than enough money, they do not bother to care or indulge in self-awareness therefore unfortunate trend of wasting food is on the rise. However, food chains, food producers and government must take the initiative to curb this ever-growing food waste.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50649350649 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88081984077 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1577918128 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.066666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272370485949 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088640332208 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649269376782 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172118314077 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613140304266 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.