It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

Exercise is beneficial for children and young people, which is predominantly undertaken. Consequently, physical training and sports should be mandatory for all scholars in all schools. In my opinion, I consider that sports and physical activity habits that will continue into adulthood.

Sports trends have developed recently to merge a greater variety of activities besides the skills necessary to play a team sport. Exercise plays a paramount role in life to keep up the human body through physical exercise. Furthermore, for example, special teachers in all schools should teach them more about activities and sports importance in life. during these classes, students can learn about their physical health moreover can start maintaining health to develop at an early age.

Sports like football, basketball, volleyball, cricket, frisbee, and many more team sports will help students to build trust which works as a team spirit and develop mental balance to play in a team. These physical education activities should take place regularly to keep students healthy and fit physically and mentally.

Moreover, activities required physical effort to sustain or to carry out children's fitness and health. For Example, In all schools, physical training shall be obligatory at prayer time and there shall be at least one class for sports before or after all lectures. They should conduct an afterschool competition. so that, they can develop moreover can execute their skills in sports/team sports such as cricket, basketball, volleyball, and more.

In conclusion, I would say exercise is the best practice which school can conduct to develop students skills, mental and physical health as well as they can understand their strength. Also, they can choose sports as a career while learning their skills and physical training in a school, which can lead to good opportunities in the future.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: During
...tivities and sports importance in life. during these classes, students can learn about...
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Suggestion: So
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, after all, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43389830508 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75618444861 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8852067289 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.866666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300627670772 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113364893599 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101540075337 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192336727171 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992322173558 0.056905535591 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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