Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times, and they think it is a waste of time to read any entertainments books. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many parents believe that their kids should only read educational books rather than sparing time for the books which entertain the young people. They argue their children only need educational materials to become successful citizens. In this essay, I will explain why I firmly disagree with this opinion for several reasons.
First of all, young readers should be free to spend their leisure time for the books that they are fond of reading to discover their interests. When these kids explore different types of books such as comics, sports books or music books; they can find out more about their interests and possible hobbies which would entertain their free time. To illustrate, when a kid, who is not familiar with football, wishes to purchase a biograpghy book of Maradona, well-known football star, parents should encourage them to buy this book, since it might enable the child to discover his interest in football. After completing the book, the young adult may spend his weekends with playing football with his friends which would make him both delighted and socially active.
Second, parents should keep their kids independent about purchasing books to flourish them freely and successfully. When children are forced to read only educational books, they would lack self confidence since they may not make particular decisions in the future without the help of their parents. In other words, making even basic personal decisions such as choosing a book without considering the preferences of children would hamper the personality of the young adults. Secondly, young people may feel less motivated to study for school if they are not allowed to read the books that are interesting to them. Life should be lived as a whole, so children should not only read books that are beneficlal for their academic success but also spare time for entertaining materials.
To sum up, I believe that young adults should be left independent to read entertaining books so as to enable them to discover their possible hobbies and to raise them as self confident, successful individuals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 94, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... independent to read entertaining books so as to enable them to discover their possible ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, such as, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17699115044 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53982814796 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3217295742 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283336427924 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121657620856 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740380335103 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193705515989 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634607428983 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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