Topic: Some parents want their children to read-only serious educational books at all times, and they think it is a waste of time to read any entertainments books. What is your opinion about this?
A famous author has said, " A room without books is like a body without a soul." In recent times, many parents have an opinion that their children should focus and study only on academic books, whereas some people believe that fiction books are distractions for students. In my opinion, educational books play a vital role in every student life, but this does not mean that storybooks cannot affect their future.
Educational books are essential for various reasons. First and foremost, students can acquire informative knowledge through books, which helps them to achieve good scores. Also, by reading all these books can keep them connected with their cultural roots and history. For example, in every institute, it is mandatory to have at least one subject related to historical studies, which will educate the children on how that country history existence. Hence, parents are more concerned that their children should focus on their academic's books because that will build up their future in positivity
However, this certainly does not mean that pleasure books must be ignored completely. I believe these books can develop the ability of innovation and creativity, which could be helpful for them in future will choosing their career. After spending an ample amount of time studying education books, reading these books will provide them mind relaxation and further to concentrate on their studies again accurately. Furthermore, it will also improve the skills in children such as reading, learning new words, and imagining their own stories, which will help to opt for a profession as a writer in the future.
In conclusion, I would argue that it is not essential educational books will be part of students, also entertainment books equally important, which could help them in improving their reading skills. So, it is the responsibility of the parents should allow children to read both the type of books.
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...ould be helpful for them in future will choosing their career. After spending an ample a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, whereas, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25483870968 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6267831266 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0917779492 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282043505994 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110699880482 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528966174321 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19093479271 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035221292618 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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