Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we are care about them. others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. discuss both views and give your own opinion
Although it sometimes thought that care for friends and family members can be showed through gifts and presents effectively, they believe it can be showed through other good alternatives. I believe that gifts and presents are plays an important role in showing love and care for relative and friends.
On one hand, it believes that gifts and presents plays a vital role in representing love and care for near and dear ones as revive the feelings and strengthen the relation. Moreover, it has a lasting effect in one life. For instance, my mother used to show me the bangles which she received on her marriage from her best friend, Neeta. Further it believe to show important of relatives and friends in one life through the precious gifts.
On the other hand, it sometimes thought that there are better alternatives to the gifts and present to show care for friends and family. They believe that helping a friend and family is also effective and have life long effect. Moreover, providing financial or moral support to them can be seen as important as gifts. For example, financial aid to the friend during his difficult time will be most important than any other gifts for him. Further, inviting for lunch/dinner can also be consider to show the feelings.
In conclusion, eventhough there are a lot of other method is available to show care and feeling for friends and family, I believe that gifts and presents are best way to represent it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believes'?
Suggestion: believes
...from her best friend, Neeta. Further it believe to show important of relatives and frie...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...mily, I believe that gifts and presents are best way to represent it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85080645161 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55371215285 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8737354701 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286529239573 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122373416071 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752551487986 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205961100767 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441809309477 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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