Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
shopping on internet has become increasing popular among people over the recent year.Individuals tend to buy everything from a book to air tickets online. there are a lot of benefits associated to making purchases on the internet, unfortunately they come with some downside. this essay will discuss how the advantages of online purchasing overshadows its disadvantages.
In the current times, people prefer to buy things online as it saves a lot of time. Everyone is stuck in a groove with their busy schedules at work that they hardly find any time to step out of their house and shop. internet provides them an online platform where they can shop anytime, anywhere and anything they desire. this saves a lot of time and hassle. Even if one is not happy with his choice he can easily apply for a refund. also, all these facilities are offered at the customer's doorstep. In addition to this, one can find discounts on vast majority of items which will not be available offline. For instance, many shopping websites like Amazon, Ebay have sales going on aroun the clock. buyers have an enourmous variety to choose and compare from. so, shopping on internet not only saves time but also saves money.
On the other hand, there are a lot of fake websites doing rounds in the market. there is a huge count of people becoming victim to such fraud sites. Sometimes a seller might sell a damaged piece and refuses to refund buyer's money. Cases such as getting duplicate products have also been widely acknowledged by many people. A person must check for reviews of the product as well as the seller before placing any order.Furthermore, at times the price of a product is quoted higher than its original price on the websites. To escape this loophole one must always compare the product on numerous distinct sites.According to a survey in The Daily Post, published on 27 March, online thefts have sharply risen in the last two years. people using their credit/debit cards need to be very careful before using their cards on any new website. In short, one must be very careful before making any purchase online so that they do not get involved in any fraud.
To conclude, in spite of the disadvantages such as online theft , shopping online has many benefits such as time and money-saving, which overshadows its downsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85894206549 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65527966288 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569269521411 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4729617444 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6818181818 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0454545455 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158252713645 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442574683764 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480007674628 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11036910421 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535159526467 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.