Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern era, most of the people around the world started the change their habits of shopping. Especially in last decant, number of online shopping is increasing. With this new changing bring some positive and negative effects for the society. In this essay I will examine the both of sides for this issue.
Generally speaking, the online shopping is getting be more and more vital for each individual in society. Obviously, there is a some strong sides of this development. First of all, when purchasing something on internet most part of people spending a less time rather than traditional shopping. For illustration, especially such as a business man and business woman unable to visit the real shopping center and in this way might seem perfect for them. Secondly, the internet has a wide range of different option.Therefore, with this option people be able to seen different price and quality in a concurrent when sitting the home.Thus, this way is inevitable succeed option such as a disable persons. For example, any kind of people who has a disable or need to accompanying person could be shopping easily. Therefore I partially agree to this advantages is vital and it explain why the online shopping is getting more popular.
And the other side, there has a some negatives side which effect on people. The internet is might be comfortable but it’s not meaning the safely. Some part of people has a bad experience with online shopping. First of all, the cyber theft. With the development in internet cause new type of crime. For illustration, the credit card crime which is really bad and important.Some people who couldn’t use to know internet could be in dangerous.Such as an elder people mostly consist of this type of individuals. Secondly, the young person is have to learn limited of shopping.The young person could be shopping with their parents card on online without the permission. And this conditions might be causes discussing in family. Therefore should everyone have to learn use the internet for prevent the disadvantages.
In conclusion, the advantages are more than the disadvantages. Just each person need to learn relevant consume on internet.Because the online shopping is future and inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, kind of, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10933333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9298160731 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482666666667 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5186919461 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193912484696 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583541594804 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545221535226 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125107543494 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641333712084 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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