World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argue that while we look at history we see there is more war happened when there is a male ruler, so to maintain serenity everyone says female emperor can be the good controller. I completely agree with this notion. This essay will first discuss why we should not have male dictatorship and later the benefits of having a women leader.
The main reason why I believe that why men are not the capable head is because of their fighting attitude and not listening the opposite views. in addition to that most of the male leaders of all the countries spend their most of nations money into the gambling games and majority illegal tasks are alwaysdone by the man. For example , in 2011, Zimbabwe prime minister made a statement in anger that no black men can take participate in their cricket team and his these words created a conflicts in between both the community. If these type of major decisions taken suddenly in any country without discussing with others then it affects in many ways to their general public.
Another reason why I believe that there are many advantages for every country of having a female leader. The first one is women have much patience than man when taking any decision and they think as well as take advice from others then implement any law or rule. Second one benefit is female know how to use financial budget because of their habits from the start of proper use of money. For instance, New-Zealand prime minister Jacinda Ardern, saved ten percent of the funds after allocated budget to each areas of their country. It is because they know better than opposite gender leader how these short steps taken today can help their nations in future.
In conclusion, although the male head think about battle with others always not their progress, however female leader always believe their community can grow when they take better judgement about future and have more finances. I think women can govern their country better instead of mens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, then, well, while, after all, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80701754386 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25808101441 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567251461988 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9497706885 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123119266189 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043958244488 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340750772671 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819652752898 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307890964758 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.