Aircraft's have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries, where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The world in 21st century has marked high rate of global trading, not only the electronic gadgets and garments but also the foods. Nowadays, the most common used transportations methods are either ships or flights. However, some experts think that, using flights for transportation doesn’t really worthy, especially in case of fruits and vegetables. While, others say airway is must to protect food quality and freshness.
Every part of world are not cultivating every type of fruits and vegetables, for instance, the desert areas like middle east, cannot grow all kinds of vegetables because of the soil type and availability of water. These kinds of countries are completely depended on importing vegetables from other countries.
On other side of the world, some countries are over flooded with seasonal vegetables, even regular vegetables. Due to lack of storage measures, the foods wastage reached high rate. Only exporting will reduce the food waste in such case. If perishable foods are sailed, preservation methods such as addition of chemical preservatives may be used to store foods longer. Although, air freight will add more costs to products but it is considered when transporting perishable foods to preserve the freshness without addition of any preservatives.
Anyhow, airfreight is unnecessary and expensive, when transporting non perishable foods, such as apples and other long shelf life fruits. Also the global trading can mobilize the growth rate of country and agricultural practices, when they are completely depended on importing foods. In such cases agriculture techniques and developing new crops are likely to fade away.
In conclusion, I am convinced advantages overweigh disadvantages. Air freight might add more cost; consumers are likely to get fruits and vegetables without preservatives, as everyone know, over consuming of chemical will have adverse effect on health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...vegetables. While, others say airway is must to protect food quality and freshness. ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
...s. Due to lack of storage measures, the foods wastage reached high rate. Only exporti...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...pples and other long shelf life fruits. Also the global trading can mobilize the gro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55631399317 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97844492995 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631399317406 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2389057532 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127415505177 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374812845243 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352196747611 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644393951088 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231623065606 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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