An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
More and more professionals are going to developed countries by leaving their home country to get more wages.The major problem this causes is shortage of experienced professional in the future for their nations and the viable solution is that their government should encourage them to work for their nation by providing them a good facilities and more payment.
The main problem this causes is lacking of the experienced workers into their nation and if their is not proper professional to treat general public like sufficient doctors in the hospital to treat them then it creates a huge problem for that country's government in the future.Because a few doctors can not treat most of the patients into their hospital.For Instance, Harvard University reports states that In 2012,in China,their biggest university in the field of medication had decided to stop their operations due to lack in the doctors who can teach students about the medication.
The viable solution is that government should intervene into this problem of movement of more professionals from their country to others country.Law enforcement agency should set a law to increase the salaries of working people so they can live their life happily into their own nation.Government should provide more facilities to them like free medicals,free public transport,less tax on the amount they are earning so they can stay into their country by saving more of their own salary.For example,Dubai had set a law into 1990s that there will be no tax onto the salaries of employees, professional and business people, it resulted a 40 percent decrease into the movement of their home country people to others nation to earn more.
In conclusion, an enormous amount in movement of their countries residents creates less shortage of professional for their home country is the main problem by this causes and this can be solved if government enforce law to provide good life for their people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17721518987 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92624171292 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455696202532 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 20.2975951904 389% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.381329537 49.4020404114 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 409.0 106.682146367 383% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.0 20.7667163134 380% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233296536567 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169425413466 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189168633626 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169425413466 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189168633626 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.5 13.0946893788 325% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.71 50.2224549098 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 11.3001002004 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.95 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 10.1190380762 332% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 10.7795591182 315% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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