These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
or experience.
Technology has really brought adequate changes in the world. It is inevitable to survive with the modernization impact. Many of the businesses are affected with the upscaling of online platforms, moreover, the retails shops claim that they have lost their business to the online market. As every coin has two sides, the pros and cons of the online sales is discussed in the below-paragraphs.
The recent stats show's that many upcoming brands and sellers are creating an online platform for their sales. Nowadays, majority of the items are available on the internet, with few clicks you can get the product delivered to the required address. It is not only time saving but also you can compare multiply brands offering the same product, thus saving money without any bargains. With the subscription of value-added features to online shops, one can get the product delivered at no extra-cost with minimal wait time.
But on the other hand, many of the customers prefer visiting a shop to buy the product as per their choice. These retail shops provide us with the added advantage of trial facilities like clothes, gadgets, etc. and also one can feel the product for example television, mobile phones, automobiles, etc. Whereas, if one is good at negotiations it possible to get the desired product at a very reasonable price from the local market.
Additionally, online consumers are vulnerable to the internet banking frauds, subsequently probability of getting scammed by the online services, Cybercrime is a major drawback, as it becomes complicated to track down the real culprit on the website. Since older generations are not adroit with these skills, they are majorly prone to such monetary frauds.
In conclusion, we need better rules and regulations to avoid the fraudster on the internet, so that consumers are relieved from cheating. Consequently, the shops must improve their serviceability and bring up interesting ideas to tackle upcoming competition from the online market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'show'.
Suggestion: show
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, really, so, thus, whereas, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.246875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85295727875 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2817351056 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203370944916 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613789446606 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537145304521 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10969984715 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398426086678 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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