Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work.1.Apologise for missing the meeting.2.Explain what happened.3.Say what you will do to compensate.

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work.
1. Apologise for missing the meeting.
2. Explain what happened.
3. Say what you will do to compensate.

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I am writing this letter to apologize for not participating to the marketing meeting yesterday.

I am deeply sorry for the occasion. I wish I could attend the meeting which was significant for the 2020 marketing budget of the firm.

Yesterdar, I could not come to the event, because my car broke down when I was on my way to work. After I stopped the car to check the engine, I realized that there were gas all below the car. I directly called the police and the repairman. They took the car to the service to replace the oil filter, therefore it took me 2 hours to arrive to work because of this unexpected incident.

I will talk with the Finance Manager, John Smith, and express the breakdown of the marketing budget of 2020 month by month today. After finishing my daily routine, I will work overtime today for the marketing slides that are needed to be prepared for the senior management in advance which you have optionally requested me. I would be glad if you can share your availability of next week to choose the date of that executive meeting.

I look forward to hearing from you regarding your availability, and once again I feel sorry for my absence.

Yours sincerely,
Ali Larter

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I am deeply sorry for the occasion. I wish I could attend the meeting which w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, therefore, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66820276498 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59718203856 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7126628845 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196796419388 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655007968411 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521399939072 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11422407791 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050095484441 0.0580467560999 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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