Over the last ten years, students pursuing further studies at universities has become increasingly popular. While some believe that this trend helps in building an educated community, some think that the growing demand might deteriorate the quality of education provided at the universities. This essay with discuss the benefits of an increase in educated population and the short comings to cater to a large number of students.
Undoubtedly, and educated community is beneficial for the economy of a country. For example, in a country like India, the relative contribution to the growth of the economy is more by software professionals. In addition, an opportunity to work as a white collared professional, increases the income of a family and hence the standard of living as well. Families with relatively more and stable income are more likely to invest in good housing projects there by contributing to the infrastructure of a city.
However, there are some draw backs to having a largely graduate student community. For example, it becomes increasing difficult to build new universities to meet the needs of the students. To build universities a country needs quite a large number of blue collared workers such as masons, carpenters, plumbers, electricians and others. The lack of skilled manual laborers could lead to an increased cost to build universities and the universities may have to accommodate more students in the existing campus. This might impact the quality of education provided.
In conclusion, a largely educated community builds a progressive and a developed nation. However, skilled manual laborers are also important to build a great infrastructure for the nation. Governments, should take measures to ensure that the quality of the education is not compromised to meet the growing demand by ensuring that the students gain additional vocational skills in addition to their degrees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: draws
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...uild universities a country needs quite a large number of blue collared workers such as masons, c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ressive and a developed nation. However, skilled manual laborers are also importa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 937.175257732 173% => OK
No of words: 300.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10496913565 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 290.88556701 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0061494311 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0519798263941 0.216113520407 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212900728959 0.0766984524023 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025731177146 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0332025548061 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115569050337 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 70.7449484536 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 7.45979381443 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 41.2886597938 208% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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