Today, more and more people choose to live by themselves. What are the causes of this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Many people are living alone these days. There are several reasons behind this trend and the most important among them are the need to acquire higher education and independence. In my opinion, living alone has more benefits than disadvantages.
Students often have to live alone. Prestigious universities are situated in metropolitan cities and hence students who want to study in these universities have to relocate to cities and live away from their parents. An advantage of this arrangement is that they will learn to cook, clean and manage their finances. And such skills are crucial for success in life. Professionals are also migrating to big cities in search of better job prospects. They also live away from their family. Some people choose to live alone because they cannot manage the monthly expenses if they live with their family. For example, many people who work in foreign countries do not take their family with them because of their inability to provide for them. They live alone and send their savings to their family living in their native place.
On the down side, there are some downsides to living alone. When people live alone it affects their relationship with their family members because of the lack of face to face interactions with them. What’s more, young people who live alone are more likely to get into bad company and develop harmful habits.
To conclude, even though living alone has become a popular trend and has its inherent advantages, people have to pay attention to its demerits in order to sustain family bonds. They also need to ensure that they are keeping good company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: DOWN_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'downside'?
Suggestion: downside
...living in their native place. On the down side, there are some downsides to living alo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9963099631 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40569464599 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535055350554 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7125061443 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6470588235 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197171457571 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689947646713 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678189139454 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134891161577 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672602222805 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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