You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so important. Tell the

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so important. Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. Yesterday I have engaged on a session at your hotel. Unfortunately I have left some papers at your hotel which were so vital for me.

Let me explain you in details. The meeting was held on main hall which called Lilac hall. As the discussion had concluded, I should stop recording and mail all the videos to my employer who was waiting to watch them. My mind was so busy and I left some important assignments on the white table on the corner of Lilac Hall next to windows. Those are essential because our new projects map are designed there and I couldn't find it by videos which I took yesterday.

Abbreviately, I really need those papers until tomorrow night. You will really save my job if you could send them to me. I am contacted at the address supplied. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.

With faithfully,

Chi Chung

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sy and I left some important assignments on the white table on the corner of Lila...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...w projects map are designed there and I couldnt find it by videos which I took yesterda...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61349693252 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55332676848 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705521472393 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9805393578 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8461538462 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5384615385 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280039078411 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867969639709 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870324140334 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19729494477 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785677633599 0.0580467560999 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.57 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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