Today a growing number of people are using private cars instead of public transportation.What are the advantages and disadvantages of owning cars?
these days, since demand of purchasing cars has increased, its production is also growing. Hence, using own cars is more common and then public transportation. despite of its benefits, it involves certain drawbacks too.
There seems two bold advantages to have a car by your own.
Firstly, private cars are useful to save time. For instance, averagely, an employee uses two or more public vehicles per day for commuting which usually waste fifteen to thirty minutes more than using their own cars. Furthermore, obviously, anybody feels more comfortable in his or her conveyances. As an example, you can use air conditioner anytime you need it.
However, private vehicles may really damage the infrastructure of a city. The more people who use their autos, the more pollution appears. As a sample these days, air pollution is one of the most worries issue governments are advertising more than past to use public vehicles. The aspects of any kind of pollution that vehicles make are harmful for humankind and earth. Besides, nowadays, since, swarm of automobile is rising and streets do not have the potential of extending, the traffic jams are much more than before
As a result, despite of the fact how convenient are private cars, for human survival, it’s mortal to use public vehicles. I believe that every person can help to decrease the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, really, so, then, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73987875402 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.0041240079 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241204003136 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903303290556 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991521902009 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147953910123 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605868725 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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