Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
Undoubtedly, computers are an inseparable part of today’s modern life. these days, computer are accessible in a vast range for many people and computer games are played by majority of children.
one of the issues that computer games bring is violence. many of personal computer games are sorted in action games and there isn’t a warden to observe these game whether is it appropriate or not. also, their programmers tend to make them more thrilled because of the more demands for action games. Therefore, these kind of games are surrounded with blood, tackles and killing. these violent games bring nothing for children but negative impacts in their mind such as nervousness. Another impact which is serious for children health is PC-games make children to have sedentary lifestyle which is stem from sitting for many hours behind laptops and computers. Inadequate physical activity will undermine children and may be a reason for many diseases like obesity and maybe an acute illness such as, stroke.
one possible approach would be for parents to ban children from playing consecutive hours. playing graphic games would be as an incentives when they increase the other skills such as a progressing in school or a successful win in sports rivalry. A more feasible approach would be for government to be more responsible about what are being established among children. they should observe more accurate to advise what concepts are in a video game. To decline playing video games, governments also must subsidize the places where provide many leisure activities for instance painting rooms, sports club and all the places which bring children to fulfill their abilities and talents.
In conclusion, it is true that computers have various consequences for children. However, there is much that can be done to address the problems constructively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3164983165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71018883355 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1088960184 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333376856496 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115039227726 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782146087402 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225980428239 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600242089124 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.