you bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. write a letter to interior decorator seeking information about his services.
in your letter;
let him know how you came to know about his work or name.
specify about your home.
discuss your furnishing taste
Dear Mr Willson,
I hope this letter finds you well. my family and I are accommodating on green hill. I wish to lodge a complaint about some of the stuffs which are in the house.
Let me explain you in detail, my name is Chi Chung who is living in first block of green hill. I have rented this house for 2 years as I am working in a mission which is long the same years in your English country.
Secondly, I would aware you since the day we have arrived the dining table which is important for eating has a serious problem. In fact one of its leg is broken and its not possible to put anything on it. Besides, also, the refrigerator’s ice maker doesn’t work sufficiently.
Furthermore, since I have read the accommodation rules. The landlord must bear the responsibilities of furniture damages. As you are aware, how vital is a refrigerator for anybody, I was wondering to inquire from you to consider these problems and fix or replace them as soon as possible. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Your sincerely,
Chi Chung
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... I hope this letter finds you well. my family and I are accommodating on green...
^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hill. I wish to lodge a complaint about some of the stuffs which are in the house. Let...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, second, secondly, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75661375661 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97322485991 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1378033146 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1538461538 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163682350435 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482148010402 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404686334751 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931926993358 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337850822624 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.