You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I have traveled to Tehran and I have stayed at Bonita hotel from 10th to 14 September. As it is summer time there and I had checked the weather forecast, which revealed the weather is sunny during those days, unfortunately, the it was pouring and my room in hotel was bitterly cold. In addition, my room’s heating system was not sufficient.
Let me explain you in details. In second day, when the climate suddenly changed from sunny day to rainy day, since I did not bring with myself warm clothes, I decided to turn on the heater. it was evident from the first moment the warmer equipment does not work well because just one of the triple line of heater had turned on.
Furthermore, after I asked from your staffs to check it, with two hours delay they came and told me it took a few days to replace old one. Thus, it was bitterly cold, I had to buy some warm clothes which cost 800 $. Beside that, I even bought a blanket to keep me warm because your hotel had not predict any warm blanket for cold days. However, I got awful flue that made me to take some days off from work.
I was wondering that it is be a good compensation if you return 10 % of whole cost of reservation and a letter which apologize for bringing me such bad moments in my stay time. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Faithfully,
Chi Chung
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...tel from 10th to 14 September. As it is summer time there and I had checked the weather for...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...sunny during those days, unfortunately, the it was pouring and my room in hotel was bi...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...othes, I decided to turn on the heater. it was evident from the first moment the w...
^^
Line 13, column 210, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$800'.
Suggestion: $800
...had to buy some warm clothes which cost 800 $. Beside that, I even bought a blanket t...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 297, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'predicted'.
Suggestion: predicted
...keep me warm because your hotel had not predict any warm blanket for cold days. However...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 28, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...m work. I was wondering that it is be a good compensation if you return 10 % ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47692307692 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37478204631 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642307692308 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8369169797 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1428571429 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211259583892 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664231063455 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588944055954 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134570265722 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915992896755 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.