You recently attended a meeting at a hotel When you returned home you found you had left some important papers at the hotel Write a letter to the manager of the hotel In your letter say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

In your letter:

say where you think you left the papers.

explain why they are so important.

tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

I have recently attended a meeting at your hotel in Gurgaon. As you know, there was a meeting on a faculty development program in the meeting room of the hotel on 20 July 2020.

Unfortunately, upon my return home after the meeting, I found that I had left some crucial documents in the conference hall at the hotel. All the materials are in the blue color folder with my name on it.

Papers are essential because it contains some confidential information and a large number of data related to the organization. So, I urgently need all the documents as soon as possible.

Could you please ship it to me by the fastest courier? I will immediately transfer the full cost involved and also share the address to send the documents. Please let me know, you have the document folder and can send it, as well as the banking details.
I appreciate your assistance in this matter.

Yours faithfully
XYZ

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tains some confidential information and a large number of data related to the organization. So, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7106918239 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75476005825 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4344931639 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0909090909 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308947058878 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924099983131 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841770309309 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128525189533 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946030205831 0.0580467560999 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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