Some people become famous when they are young age. Do you think is it positive or negative?
Nowadays, it is prevalent some people getting famous at their young age. One of the most vital factors catalyses their invention is the availability of technology and career guidance from both parents and teachers. However, some people believe that there more negative aspects when they become a celebrity at an earlier phase of life. In the following passage, both pros and cons will be explained details before declaring my stance.
Mr Mark Zuckerberg, become famous at a very young age due to the invention of social Media website know as Face book, which helped many people to connect globally. Besides, this would encourage many children to thrive hard in their inventions to become famous. Thus, both country and people will be benefitted by discoveries of youngsters, which is eccentric for the nation to grow economically too. Moreover, when some entrepreneurs create a new startup which will produce more job opportunities for the graduates. Therefore, people become famous at a young age can foster many youngsters to take their aspiration seriously, which can do wonders for society.
On the other side, young celebrities show immature character they attend public functions, which set a bad example for upcoming generations. For instance, Justin Bieber becomes very famous for his songs, where he soon become a billionaire in a short period. He spends a massive amount on gambling and buying expensive cars, which is shows he immature. Furthermore, fame will be easily spoiled due to unethical behaviour, which could trigger unwanted controversies. Hence, youngsters become famous at a young age can lead to various disaster for many.
To sum up, becoming famous at a young age is an incredibly intricate process, but due to their unwanted actions among public places can defame their life instantly. Hence, youngsters becoming famous at a tender age will lead to an avenue of conspiracies which can spoil their growth.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22186495177 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77577829654 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59807073955 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1054801479 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304443033171 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108466614426 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907884571531 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195798499389 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517647970656 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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