Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing?
Wealth and fame are for sure two most desirable things which are wanted to be gotten by everyone. Many people squander their whole life to reach popularity, but they find that their efforts are going in vain, while a few are lucky enough to get fame, even at their very early years. From my point of view, however, it is beneficial to become famous in young age.
Firstly, there are several factors in making someone famous, and they are varied as it is clear that an essential motive would be family background. A son or a daughter of the celebrity, for instance, will undoubtedly enjoy being well-known since their childhood, even though they have not done something unique. I validate it as a positive, in other words, a young offspring will be under the limelight from his or her young age, and as a result, it offers excellent opportunities to reach a perfect future life.
Furthermore, hard-working, along with innovation, would be other practical ways in this regard. A young student strives to invent something or to discover new ideas despite the interference that hinders his/her productivity would certainly have better chances of becoming a well-known personality soon. Take an example of the owner of Facebook; he was also a student like many people at university and devoted his time and effort on creating as well as introducing something new: social networking system. Finally, his struggle paid him off and today, who does not know him?
From the points mentioned above, becoming renowned at a younger age is for sure practical and offers an immense amount of confidence and chance to develop further.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94139194139 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70545988875 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655677655678 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7748650433 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.636363636 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184989662869 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641751861129 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595491752792 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108748188504 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519399722439 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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