Essay topics:
You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear sir or Madam,
Dear sir or Madam,
This letter is about an advertisement published in a magazine for the requirement of a person to live and stay with you for six months and take care of your six-year-old child. I want to give my nomination for this role as I believe that the kind of character I am handling in my current company makes me a strong contender for this opportunity. Now, I am working in a day-care centre where I am taking care of kids of all age groups throughout the day, and I have ten years of similar working experience for different regions across Australia. Also, Being a mother of two adolescents, I am aware of all the requirements of a child. I usually spend my free time by exploring things at different locations as I am new to the southern area of Australia, I would love to go out, and I can also take your children along with me whenever kid wants to.
I believe you will consider my application for this role. Thanks for your time and consideration and forthcoming response.
Thanks,
XYZ
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52127659574 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85086534717 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2068525462 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247342919523 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945349520748 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10761125384 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188810510628 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503437171444 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52127659574 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85086534717 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2068525462 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247342919523 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945349520748 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10761125384 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188810510628 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503437171444 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.