You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
- Say where you think you left the papers.
- Explain why they are so important
- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I forgot to put some important reports into my briefcase and left them unintentionally in your hotel. Allow me to elaborate on this situation.
I had a business trip to Ha Noi City and attended the meeting with the international partners in Lotus conference room on the second floor of your hotel. After a long day of presentation and discussion, I urgently collected everything including papers and equipment in order to leave for the airport on time. However, I forgot some documents that were put on last row table in meeting room
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I cannot express how crucial those reports are, as they contain classified information relating to names and address of my clients on business. By any chance, if these papers are in wrong hand, it will cause detrimental consequence for my company and lead to financial impact.
Thus, I would be very grateful if your staffs found and keep them is safe custody. Along with this, please arrange to send this file as soon as possible to my address that is provided to you accordingly. Your prompt action will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Haki
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e put on last row table in meeting room . I cannot express how crucial those rep...
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y appreciated. Yours sincerely, Haki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, second, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92893401015 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81738973699 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680203045685 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4732183021 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2727272727 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165341222556 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470817203902 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686745026538 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973057720202 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732529156592 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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