You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you
were unhappy with the teaching quality.
Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter:
• explain why you chose to study English at the school
• describe the problems you had with the lessons
• suggest how the classes could be improved
Dear Sir,
I am Mr Shreyas Parab, from batch-B2020/12. I have recently completed The English Complete Guidance course from your school. I am really disappointed by the new methodology and problems faced due to online teaching.
This course was recommended by my friend, he attended the offline lectures before the pandemic situation, and also there is a drastic linguistic improvement in his speaking and writing abilities.
The online lectures were not well organized, frequent internet connection problems during live lectures at a tutor's end and incapability of teachers to teach on a digital platform were the major problems faced by me.
For improvement in future, it would better if the lectures are pre-recorded and time allotment for one-on-one problem solving for the students with respect to English language is included. Additionally, training must be provided to the staff for teaching on digital platforms for effective learning of students.
I hope the feedbacks are taken positively, with the improvement in future programmes.
Your's faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tutors'' or 'tutor's'?
Suggestion: tutors'; tutor's
...tion problems during live lectures at a tutors end and incapability of teachers to tea...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... problems faced by me. For improvement in future, it would better if the lectures are pr...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57575757576 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10539682486 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5903790974 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149515697843 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535593114179 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508673361242 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653195379718 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332865010792 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 8.71597938144 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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