Dear Mr. Singh
I am a regular customer of your shop. I am writing this missive to describe my dissatisfaction about a product which I have recently bought from your shop.
I came to your place yesterday and asked for a mobilephone to your employee.He showed me a number of samples of phone and at last I choose Nokia Lumia .I checked all the features at that time,after my satisfaction he packed it for me. When I returned back to my home, I opened the box of mobile phone,but when I switch on the mobile it took a long time to start. Moreover, I was shocked,when I found that some of the buttons of keypad were also not working.I think your employee had given me the wrong phone rather than which I have selected.I became depressed to see this.
I request you to please ask from your employee that if he has done this by mistake and please send anyone from your store to collect the
Phone alongwith it's bill from me and I will come to you on the following weekend for the replacement of it.
Hope you will look after my matter as soon as possible.
Thanking You
Yours Sincerely 31st May 2018
Jyotika
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Singh I am a regular customer of your shop. I ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...I have recently bought from your shop. I came to your place yesterday and asked...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ave recently bought from your shop. I came to your place yesterday and asked ...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: He
...sked for a mobilephone to your employee.He showed me a number of samples of phone ...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f phone and at last I choose Nokia Lumia .I checked all the features at that time,...
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Suggestion: I
...phone and at last I choose Nokia Lumia .I checked all the features at that time,a...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , after
....I checked all the features at that time,after my satisfaction he packed it for me. Wh...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...atisfaction he packed it for me. When I returned back to my home, I opened the box of mobile ...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...y home, I opened the box of mobile phone,but when I switch on the mobile it took a l...
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Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...g time to start. Moreover, I was shocked,when I found that some of the buttons of key...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...reover, I was shocked,when I found that some of the buttons of keypad were also not working...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: I
...buttons of keypad were also not working.I think your employee had given me the wr...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...phone rather than which I have selected.I became depressed to see this. I req...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ted.I became depressed to see this. I request you to please ask from your emp...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nd anyone from your store to collect the Phone alongwith its bill from me and I w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ible. Thanking You Yours Sincerely 31st May 2018 Jyotika
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46116504854 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55351341613 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4235135895 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.875 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173762667677 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704982649589 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653939080459 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846350459015 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570655326959 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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