You recently bought piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain what what happened when you phoned the shop
Say what you would like the manager to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to make a complaint on a rice cooker, I have purchased from your company on 20th of May 2019. However, I tried to use it on the next day, but could not switch on the equipment.
Therefore, I have tried to contact the Sales Manager for five times, finally was able to contact him at my sixth call on the same day. Then, I have complained him that I could not use the rice cooker on the following day of purchases. As a response, to my call he promised me to send a service team on Monday, the 22nd May. It is been a week no, but he did not send the service team to find out the issue in that kitchen equipment.
Consequently, I had to use cooker in making rice for the past week, which made lucrative number of issues for my family members since I am not used to cook rice using a cooker.
Therefore, I request you to immediately send the service team to find out the issue of the appliance and take it for the repair at your earliest. I will appreciate if you could replace with another rice cooker till it is being returned after the repair.
I hope you would give your prompt attention on this matter, since the product is in the guarantee period. If not, please make arrangements to return back the money as I have not used the rice cooker even for a single day.
Yours faithfully,
Sandra
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to cook rice using a cooker. Therefore, I request you to immediately send the se...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is being returned after the repair. I hope you would give your prompt attent...
^^^
Line 10, column 143, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...od. If not, please make arrangements to return back the money as I have not used the rice c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, however, if, may, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27450980392 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38548088048 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.2360098321 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132404151239 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564367441612 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462968024203 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800698374355 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042287389328 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.