You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter,
describe what you enjoyed about the course
say how much cooking you've done since the course
suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir,
I have completed my cookery course at your school last month. I am writing regarding your request for the reviews on the course I had done.
In this course, the tutor's style of teaching was outstanding. He was very polite and patient with all the students. Apart from teaching us the delicious recipes of Indian and Chinese Cuisine, we were also given special tips to improve our chopping and presentation skills.
During this course, I have learned 12 Indian and 7 Chinese food recipes. The chef also provided us with information on using alternative ingredients if some of the ingredients are not available to prepare a particular dish. In other words, theoretical knowledge in cookery along with practical made this course worthwhile.
However, I would advise you to include some cookery classes in Continental and Italian Cuisine. Since they are in high demand nowadays, it would be beneficial for your cookery school.
I hope you will consider my suggestion.
Yours faithfully,
Jaskaran Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ion on using alternative ingredients if some of the ingredients are not available to prepar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, while, apart from, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24242424242 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77338789944 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9252247417 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0833333333 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294308529913 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964172240984 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913256695386 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151919939251 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124343581623 0.0580467560999 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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