Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to give feedback on a cookery course that I attended during weekends.
I was flattered with this amazing cookery course. I enjoyed almost everything about the course, but the thing that I liked more is the variety of ingredients and various techniques to demonstrate food dishes. Moreover, I was amazed by the kitchen preparation and western style of cooking.
I did cooking twice a week but I tried to cook English food during weekends with the help of course material. However, I had decorated some dishes such as deserts, cakes, and Italian foods during my brother’s birthday party.
I recommend the cookery course on Seafood because there is no such place where people can enjoy this type of food. Therefore, I was thinking to open a restaurant near my hometown. If you have such type of courses in the future at your place, I loved to join.
Kind regards,
Mayank Desai
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 7, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'cook'
Suggestion: cook
... and western style of cooking. I did cooking twice a week but I tried to cook Englis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87974683544 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6003417004 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689873417722 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1287973783 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274774837943 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940432823466 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980571664124 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169821954708 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986106149754 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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